
Here we are again. It’s been a few days since I wrote the first part to this little historical endeavour and to be honest, I haven’t thought much about Arbiture. I kind of needed some time away to re-collect my thoughts before coming back — to look upon it with fresh eyes as it were.
So, as last we left this world I was considering in which way to remove the wings from my peoples… that has not become any clearer but when you consider this is about ‘world building’, it’s not a priority to know the reasons to the why. Instead we just want to know where the why is happening — still with me?
Let’s go straight for the jugular: the Year of The Lost.
Basically the Year of The Lost is the beginning — the time the first of our Angelic folk loose their heavenly wings and the world of the Angelus goes severely awry. As said, I’m not sure how this occurs, but it does and it leads to a ripple effect. Society begins to waver a little at the ‘difference’ they’re suddenly faced with, and considering the Angelus came together from two worlds and met in perfect cohesion, ‘difference’ is something not visited before on this large a scale. Divinity does not look for wrinkles, it just accepts it is divine.
We can assume the form of leadership they have (some secrets are best kept as such) looks unkindly upon this changed being. Dissidence embroils as the people find themselves torn. It is at this point I am considering the two worlds taking a step back from one-another. Somehow their deeply rooted views on their faith comes to light again and it defines the points of view they have and the decisions they choose.
This ‘tainted’ Angelus begins to form support on some scale. This may be the peoples of it’s own world before the joining at Arbiture, or in a more revolutionary step Angelus who take it’s side and choose to fight for the allowance of difference. This obviously sprawls into something akin to a tri-world catastrophe. The Angelus have endured little but self-gratification and egomania and as such, they do not have the patience or notable traits to help heal a rift easily or even accept anything less than the sum of their parts.
Falling apart at the seams, society is shattered into two groups; those who stand for the changes they have witnessed in the wingless individual and the acceptance of it within the boundaries of their faith, and those who see it as sin, as travesty and nothing less than a hellish turn that needs cleansing from their sublime being. The Year of The Lost is a title to many things including, but not exclusive to the loss of divinity in the eyes of the Angelus, the faith lost in the society of the Angelus in regard to the Fallen’s point of view, the losses of faith, divinity, truth and much more.
The depths of this are echoed in man’s own short fallings: his discrimination, his sins, the heights of blindness and the grounding of true-vision, the failings of opportunities to enrich our species and so many more things. I see everything the Angelus go through as a magnified example of what has, is and will always happen in our reality. On many levels, this story is a reflection of ourselves.
The two-sides become the Angelus and the Fallen: you can guess which is which. Society as they (and we) know it is decimated and left to ruins, the two worlds retract into themselves and the fighting continues for a century, perhaps millennia. This is where we pick up the short-story, the Fallen.
Above you may agree, as do I, is a very brief explanation of what happens but it’s all relative to the point of the matter. This is about world building, not story detailing. I may have given some strong details away, but that’s all stage work. The story as it unfolds is set in a time far beyond the Year of The Lost. It’s about blood, sweat and tears — not how the world/s came to be.
Would you read it? I’d hope so, but there is plenty more to investigate; to solidify. This is framework right? It would be nice if that frame was built upon and something strong enough to withstand a powerful wind took root.
Next time, I don’t know… any suggestions?




